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[Author's Note: this is a poem that is suppose to be like in a point of view of the children both a little older and young babies, this poem is for them]
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you took the life we had away
the moment you left us in the car
why?
oh why, didn't we mean anything to you
the first breath we had that was from you
the first laugh we had that came from you
so why did you leave us alone in a car
in a hot day,
knowing the danger it would be bringing
and take us away
you said you loved us
but was that really true?
cause if you really loved us
you wouldn't leave us alone in a car
and we wouldn't be heaven so soon,
some kids and babies are lucky
and are saved on time
but for all of us now
who never got a chance to live more than a few months or a few years
we are the innocent ones who have done nothing wrong,
you were the wrong ones for you should know
that leaving a child in a car
in a hot day like it was,
was just asking for trouble
and the life you took away
you may ask yourself
if I will ever forgive you for what you did
leaving me alone while you went off to do your shopping or go party with your friends
but should I forgive you for the lack of love you showed me when I was still with you
maybe in my next life
I will be loved and protected
and never left alone in a car,
for all of us know what you did was wrong
and you never really loved me at all.
cause if you did, I would still be here today.
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you took the life we had away
the moment you left us in the car
why?
oh why, didn't we mean anything to you
the first breath we had that was from you
the first laugh we had that came from you
so why did you leave us alone in a car
in a hot day,
knowing the danger it would be bringing
and take us away
you said you loved us
but was that really true?
cause if you really loved us
you wouldn't leave us alone in a car
and we wouldn't be heaven so soon,
some kids and babies are lucky
and are saved on time
but for all of us now
who never got a chance to live more than a few months or a few years
we are the innocent ones who have done nothing wrong,
you were the wrong ones for you should know
that leaving a child in a car
in a hot day like it was,
was just asking for trouble
and the life you took away
you may ask yourself
if I will ever forgive you for what you did
leaving me alone while you went off to do your shopping or go party with your friends
but should I forgive you for the lack of love you showed me when I was still with you
maybe in my next life
I will be loved and protected
and never left alone in a car,
for all of us know what you did was wrong
and you never really loved me at all.
cause if you did, I would still be here today.
this is in memory of the 7 month baby over at Texas and all other babies and little kids who weren't saved on time
this is a poem that is for them, which is the words I think they would say to those who caused them to be well you know.
I just wrote this a few minutes ago, and well I tried the best I could on this and it isn't to short or to long
this poem that was made in memory of them, might not be perfect but at least I tried.
this is a poem that is for them, which is the words I think they would say to those who caused them to be well you know.
I just wrote this a few minutes ago, and well I tried the best I could on this and it isn't to short or to long
this poem that was made in memory of them, might not be perfect but at least I tried.
© 2016 - 2024 Elzathehedgehog
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